Option One

Although I like this front page, I wont be using it as there is quite a lot going on, which may lead to some readers not wanting to read and/or buy the magazine.

Also, I think that the style of writing that I have used is uninteresting for the audience that my magazine is aimed, as I believe it may be a style found on an older persons magazine.

I won't be using this contents page either. First of all the type of text I have used for the word 'Contents' is too small and plain considering it is the title of a page, whilst the page headings are too big.

In addition, there isn't anything else on the page apart from the writing and the lone image of the school logo, which I think is too big.